Shadorma: A poetic form consisting of six line stanza with a total of 26 syllables(3,5,3,3,7,5). I have rhymed the lines with the same number of syllables. (abaacb)
As a part of Coleen’s 2020 weekly poetry challenge XXX, synonyms only, I have used intimate and insinuate for hint, and valiant for bold.
All the clues
Combined, intimate
And let loose
All the news
Among the heartless spirits
To insinuate;
……
And abuse
All secrets private;
The dying hues
Without use,
As the valiant one has
All defects innate!
COLLEEN’S 2020 WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. XXX #SYNONYMSONLY
MeharAli 
What a lovely double shadorma. Great work! Did you add the URL of your post in Mr. Linky on my challenge post? That way, everyone will read your poem. ❤
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Thank you dear Colleen! ♥️
I’ve tried adding but couldn’t! 😕
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OK. Take the URL of your post: https://3masblog.wordpress.com/2020/09/08/defects-innate/ and add that to the Mr. Linky link. Click in the post here: https://colleenchesebro.com/2020/09/08/colleens-2020-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-xxx-synonymsonly/. Click the green print that says Mr. Linky. ❤
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Done! Thank you! 😊
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Yay! Glad to help! 😊
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You’ve reminded me that when I was much younger our Sunday comics had a strip called “Prince Valiant”…
I do believe there are those who are noble without having noble blood. 🙂
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And they, I believe, are the ones with a noble heart!
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We need more valiant hearts these days. Great sentiments.
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Your Mr. Linky Link worked, by the way, Mehar. A poem one can read and reread. Well done.
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You made my day 😊
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Very poignant poem, I found the heartless spirits and dying hues lines to be very moving and deep Mehar.
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